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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-09-11 07:18 AM

Reflections

bliss of yesterday
gray window of black and white
reflections of mind
break shadows near tomorrow
gentle shades enclosed colors

Charisma
11/09/01
~*TMP*~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-11 07:25 AM

Charisma~
You work the Tanka so uniquely~

Stunning is this write~

There is a vibrancy to your thoughts
that clearly color thoughts in our minds.

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-09-12 07:21 PM

you do these so well my friend. . .

I'm always amazed. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-09-12 10:14 PM

So wonderful!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-12 11:56 PM

this is just beautiful Charisma

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2001-09-13 07:16 AM

May the shadows in the reflection soon wane... Nicely done, Charisma..

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-09-13 12:08 PM

beautifully done Charisma! ((Hugs to you))

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-09-13 12:27 PM

wonderfully done, Charisma

so much beauty in the contrast between light and shadows

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-09-13 01:42 PM

wonderful tanka

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2001-09-13 03:58 PM

You have mastered the tankas well Charisma, it is one of my favorite forms. This is beautiful.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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