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The Lonely Stranger
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0 posted 2001-09-11 05:03 AM


---Solitude ---
~
Looking across the dreary expanse
That was the bleak morning sky
Brought to mind thoughts of you.
~
In that vast skyscape filled with
The gray clouds that signaled gloom,
There was a break, a brief break.
~
A break in the gloom that liberated
Your  brilliant light to blaze upon
My soul like nothing before or since.
~
Even as the glow warmed through to
My soul, thawed my once frigid heart, I  knew
That the break would be painfully short.
~
My joy was tempered by the sight of the
Dreary clouds slowly engulfing the light. In
What seemed like a moment, the light was gone.
~
Now as I look across the sky, I see no more
Breaks in this gloom, it goes to the end of
The horizon, as far as the heart can see,
There is Solitude.

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

© Copyright 2001 Gerald H. Monroe - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
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1 posted 2001-09-11 05:33 AM


What a volume within....so sad but I am sure that there will be a break again...

Excellent write that moved my heart!

((warm hugs))
Charisma

Dee
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2 posted 2001-09-11 07:20 AM


Beautiful but sad write, Lonely Stranger. Hope another break comes your way soon.

Dee

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3 posted 2001-09-11 07:34 AM


LonelyStranger~
There is fragile beauty in bleak thoughts that are so well written~

'A break in the gloom that liberated
Your  brilliant light to blaze upon
My soul like nothing before or since.'


Once warmed by the light, it's difficult to conceive being without it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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walker
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4 posted 2001-09-11 07:36 AM


Great expression of emotions. Solitude is our shadow.
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