Open Poetry #15 |
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Liquid Dreams |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? ![]() |
Liquid Dreams Dreams are like liquid as they slip right from your grasp, Easily disintegrate like a reflection in a puddle of water when it is splashed. They disappear into limbo as you awaken from your unconscious state of mind. Evaporating into the air Seeming so much like reality, But they are just subconscious thoughts; a mere formality. Liquid dreams are like fluid because of the way the thought flow, Leaving your mind wandering and vulnerable to all and your wildest dreams exposed, Who is to tell you that your dreams can’t be reached in a lifetime? Day dreaming is just a way to escape the pressures of lifes daily grind, A way to unwind from hardships you had to endure, The liquid dreams are pure. Thoughts that bring pleasure and bliss, From something as simple as a kiss. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
...and shall we forever dream...helen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
and life belongs to the dreamers!! Oh, this is wonderful!! (and one of my most favorite subjects....... ![]() The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey Sweetie, I loved these lines.."Dreams are like liquid as they slip right from your grasp, Easily disintegrate like a reflection in a puddle of water when it is splashed" Keep up the great work! I'm lovin this. <3 RosePetal |
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