Open Poetry #15 |
Intuition |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I feel you touching me But your no where in sight Your thinking of e arn't you? Intuitions might Connie McDonald Copyright@2001 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
hmmm...E...e-mail...esp?...you've got me thinking on this one! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sunshine..... LOL Then I've done my job Thanks : ) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Very, VERY clever, Connie! (and less than 20!!). You almost tricked my detail-oriented, grammar-policing intuition! -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... nicely done indeed... yep never know who is touching or watching.. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Mark: detail-oriented, grammer-policing intuition That scares the Heck a Roonies out of me ROFLMAO LOL Glad I was able to please with the read.... Cpat: Glad you enjoyed Your words mean more then you know.... Thank You |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
love the word play in this one. . . wonder if anyone will notice it??? great job. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I lov it and am still thinging about the e |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Hmmm - - - Guess I'm not one of the enlightened readers herabouts. Your liberal language escapes me. Tricked, I suppose. |
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