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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2001-09-10 02:00 PM

Outside the walls of your heart, I stand with candle burning bright
Hoping to shine, within your darkness, a beam of love's pure light
My light burned there once before, within your castle's walls
But now, I stand out here alone and you hear not my call

How I long for those days again, when our love was bright and new
Nothing else mattered in the world, there was only me and you
But then your hand let go of my own, and to your castle you fled
Now, I stand out here alone while within, your heart is dead

Please open your heart again to me, my dearest darling true,
No one else can comfort me, no one else my love, but you
Peer over your castle's walls to see me in this rain
And know that the warmth of my love can heal your deepest pain

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2001-09-10 02:08 PM

Come inside the castle walls and warm up by the fire. Welcome to Passions. Very nice. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-09-10 02:10 PM

A beautiful first post. Your gift of words will be a much appreciated addition to passions. Welcome!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2001-09-10 02:11 PM

Hey there, Welcome to Passions!! I enjoyed your poem, looking forward to more!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-09-10 03:31 PM

Welcome to passions....and what a wonderful entrance you've made....I love it a lot.

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting

Charisma

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-09-10 03:46 PM

Welcome!

I liked this very much, it's really sweet

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-09-10 03:50 PM

wonderful employ of metaphor and imagery,
excellent cadence...
Welcome to Poetry Land, so nice to have you here with us.
jm

Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-09-10 03:59 PM

Perfect...James

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-09-10 04:22 PM

Welcome to Passions! One minute while I lower the drawbridge for you to come inside. We'll sit by the fire for awhile and chat. I await more of your splendid writing. Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

9 posted 2001-09-10 04:51 PM

Welcome to passions...the entrance is on the other side of the castle come on in...
This is beautiful work, hope to see more from you soon
Cindi

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

10 posted 2001-09-10 05:09 PM

Excellent poem, full of heart,Welcome to passions.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

11 posted 2001-09-10 06:06 PM

Welcome to our castle .....

Such a beautiful lovely and heartfelt write....I'll be looking forward to enjoy more of your work....

Thank you and welcome again at Passions

******************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2001-09-10 06:13 PM

MoonlightRomeo~
Welcome to the castle of Passions !
You will enjoy the friendship and talent here.
Hope to see more of you as you navigate the forums.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

13 posted 2001-09-10 07:34 PM

Thank you all for such a wonderful welcome. I hope that I can find a home here, and that you all will enjoy my work.

Thank you again.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

14 posted 2001-09-10 07:55 PM

ahh..The Moonlight Romeo comes to us with his first poem, and what a poem it is! Welcome to Passions, sir. May you find whatever it is you are looking for.

I am many.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2001-09-10 08:33 PM

Welcome to Passion, you will do nicely here. This is most lovely, and I as the rest look forward to more.

Greeneyes~

***

"If a single star I see
Ever made a wish come true
It would bring you back to me"

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 09-10-2001).]

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

16 posted 2001-09-11 12:00 PM

Welcome, welcome, Moonlight Romeo. Such a grand entrance. I too, am looking forward to more.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

17 posted 2001-09-11 12:31 PM

This is a captivating piece! Hope you will enjoy Passions. There are wonderful friends here.

Betty Lou Hebert

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

18 posted 2001-09-12 10:46 AM

Welcome To Passions

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

19 posted 2001-09-12 10:48 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

20 posted 2001-09-19 07:27 PM

To the top...James

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

21 posted 2001-09-19 07:55 PM

Again, thank you all. You've all been wonderful, and the writing here is so well done, I don't know where to start!!

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

22 posted 2001-09-23 01:12 AM

This is so beautiful. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

23 posted 2001-09-24 09:35 AM

Very nicely done! How often lovers hide behind those walls of stone ~sigh~ you expressed this very well, welcome and thank you for sharing it! *S*

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

24 posted 2001-09-24 07:12 PM

Beautiful work, Romeo. Welcome to Passions!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

25 posted 2001-09-24 09:18 PM

Thank you all again. You are very nice to read my work.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

26 posted 2001-10-07 11:52 PM

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thats AWESOME!!!!!!!
I missed alot while I was away.

Heather (aka CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

27 posted 2001-10-14 07:52 AM

Ahhh... so romantic!

loved it!

~Tier

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