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Alone, Together |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Soft cool air, a breathtaking view a perfect day spent alone with you. Birds crying off in the distance serenity flowing in, no resistance. We listen quietly, wind singing it's song a day such as this could not be wrong. A mist settles over mountains in our sight upon steady winds the bird takes flight. Mountains rise majestically overhead to natures calling we're quietly lead. In this beautiful and calming place we sit together in the wide open space. Here alone, together as time stands still there are no words to describe the feel. A prayer for these feelings to never cease we breathe the essence, this place of peace. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 09-10-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Serenely beautiful, Donna... looks like you too have found your "Rome"... (see my poem, "Roman Nights", in the archives). Very nicely written, exuding a feeling of peace and content. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautiful!!!  |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wonderful and peaceful, the rhymes were great Throw your heart out in front of you |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love is so beautiful, great poem. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, i believe it's already been said but what the heck! this was beautiful! luved it !  And I'd... give it all away |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
one big word - BEAUTIFUL cottage |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Gentle Spirit, Fine words here, well done Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Great read..enjoyed it a lot alan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Mountains rise majestically overhead to natures calling we're quietly lead. In this beautiful and calming place we sit together in the wide open space. Here alone, together as time stands still there are no words to describe the feel. A prayer for these feelings to never cease we breathe the essence, this place of peace. ================================ when you write your rhymes of nature... theres no stopping ya  lovely poem of serenity and peace GS!! perfect cadence and wonderful imagery as well. Beautiful !! Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mark, I am sure that I will be looking that one up as soon as possible. I don't know if I have found my Rome, but it sure was a beautiful place. Thanks. Sea, thanks much *s* Shadow, it was a rather peaceful day. Walker I thank you for the kind reply. Glad you enjoyed it Stac, and remember.......beauty is found in the simplest of things. Luv ya girl. And for you Cottage, Thank you! DJD, thank you, and let me say, I love your signature. That in itself is rather beautiful. Alan, thanks alot. This was written in Virginia, and I went through WV to get there. Glad that you enjoyed. Ah Janet honey, I can always count on you for your kind words and support. It does my heart good to know that the queen of poetry enjoys my own words. I thank you poetess Janet, lady of peace. Hugs. Thanks ya'll.......peace. Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
How did I miss this one? Beautiful sentiments with lovely images of nature. Took me right there to that peaceful place. Thank you. |
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