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Open Poetry #15
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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-09-10 03:16 AM

seven deadly sins
to tempt a careless dreamer
no tomorrow now
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ethome
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1 posted 2001-09-10 04:38 AM

Is that one of the seven daedly ones.......I like the creative thought put into this... Thanks for sharing it Paula
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2 posted 2001-09-10 08:32 AM

Paula,

i found this to be thought-provoking...i like the way you concluded your senryu...
Sunnyone
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3 posted 2001-09-11 08:30 AM

Yes......a thought-provoker this one is, and very worthy of one's contemplation!!!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    
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4 posted 2001-09-11 08:32 AM

very nicely done..one to contemplate and admire....

I enjoyed!
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