unspoken language (response to alans "ive been kissed" :) )

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dgvarner
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0 posted 2001-09-09 09:40 PM

your eyes talk--
they talk to me in the darkness
saying things
i never thought i could believe

your eyes speak to me
the things your lips
                    keep silent--
the words
you find too hard to utter;
the words better left unsaid...

your eyes
are a light in the night
shining through my body
burning my flesh
and reaching deep inside

your eyes whisper--
they talk to me in shadowed tones
telling me secrets of your mind
whispering your thoughts
                    to my ear

your eyes--
          kissed me
before you ever pulled me in...

-dgvarner
7-22-89
for clm

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i've been lonely too long..now i'm ready to be loved too much.."  ty herndon

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-09-2001).]

Alan
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1 posted 2001-09-09 10:10 PM

WOW dg..this is beautiful. I am glad you posted it. It made me smile. It is a great read. I think I will keep it.
alan

dgvarner
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2 posted 2001-09-09 10:46 PM

lol..thanks ALAN! so glad you enjoyed it

, g

Balladeer

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3 posted 2001-09-09 10:52 PM

Oh, this is very beautiful...and the last lines could not be better. This is one to be proud of, miss

dgvarner
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4 posted 2001-09-09 10:57 PM

hey..mr BALLADEER..youre the one i've been warned about....ROFL! ...

glad you liked this oldie from the attic..

thanks for readin'!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"no man was ever so much deceived
by another than by himself, you see..." ~corey hart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-09-09 11:07 PM

your eyes--
kissed me
before you ever pulled me in...

WOW!! Love this!!! Good read before running up that staircase tonight...and, I do mean running!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

SEA

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with you

6 posted 2001-09-10 01:47 AM

WOW! this is wonderful! I love the ending....yes, I think I need to keep this one

and nice new picture by the way

SEA

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with you

7 posted 2001-09-10 01:48 AM

it's late *clicks the library button*

Marge Tindal

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8 posted 2001-09-10 06:05 AM

DG~
Very nice, lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

dgvarner
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9 posted 2001-09-10 06:46 AM

ENCHANTRESS..woohoo! running are you..?! lol glad you enjoyed..

SEA..LOL @ you..

thanks for reading..glad you liked

(thanks on the pic thing too

)

MARGIE..thanks friend margie..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"no man was ever so much deceived
by another than by himself, you see..." ~corey hart

dgvarner
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10 posted 2001-09-10 06:48 AM

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-10-2001).]

kaile

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11 posted 2001-09-10 08:11 AM

i was about to remark that wow, all your poems are getting so sensual these days til i read your comment to balladeer about how this is an oldie from the attic

i liked the implications of the second verse and yes, i think you have a winner of an ending too...

is 1989 the year you started writing??

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

12 posted 2001-09-10 09:40 AM

*Wow* DG....this is absolutely a fabulous write....love your thoughts!

Charisma

dgvarner
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13 posted 2001-09-10 12:34 PM

KAILE..sensual huh...i didnt know i possessed such...lol

thanks kaile..glad you enjoyed the read

no..i started writing "seriously" in 1984..but i recently found the first poem i ever wrote..that was in about '82 i think..(it was SCARY! LOL)

CHARISMA..thank you friend poet

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"no man was ever so much deceived
by another than by himself, you see..." ~corey hart

kaile

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14 posted 2001-09-10 12:53 PM

LOL..i think you should be real proud that you have accumulated a living legacy and that you have managed to persist in a passion for so long...

show us your first poem some day, will you?

Zinsser
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15 posted 2001-09-10 01:23 PM

Perfect ending : ) Love it!
~Connie~

Moonlight Romeo

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16 posted 2001-09-10 07:45 PM

Reminds me that I might have to take "Language Lessons".

Wonderful, I really liked it.

dgvarner
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17 posted 2001-09-10 10:42 PM

KAILE..thank you again my friend..

  i am pretty proud of my writing..its not always great..and a lot of the REAL OLD stuff, well..a lot of it sucks!  lol  but its mine..and i had to start it somewhere..
show you my what?  oh..lol  well..it was a short little ditty to a boy i liked..i could quote it to you...but..i'm telling you...ITS REALLY SCARY!  bad grammer and everything...lol
CONNIE..thank you

MLROMEO..'language lessons'...

interesting course... thanks for reading..and welcome to passions!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"no man was ever so much deceived
by another than by himself, you see..." ~corey hart

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