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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-09-09 08:40 AM


            “BEAUTY OF A WOMAN”
                           by
                       Bill Charles
                          ~~~~
I walk this lonely path, in search of you,
stumbling along this forsaken, barren ground…
The trees staring at me, dancing with the wind,
        perhaps they are saying to me,
                listen for your sound…

At the end of the path, you were standing there,
under the waterfalls, and I only stared…
The sun shone down touching you, through the silence,
        knowing then for certain,
                that my heart still cared…

Streams of water, cascading over your presence,
showers wet, and running through your hair…
It shined and sparkled, like diamonds in the sunlight,
        and I remembered all the nights,
                of my despair…

Your head tilted back, displaying gentle soft lips,
there was a time in the past, when I knew them so well…
But now they were moist, from droplets that fondled you,
        not the wetness from my lips,
                for they would never tell…

We spent the night together, close in a loving embrace,
I knew deep inside, that when my eyes were to close…
And open them once again, you would not be there,
        but in my heart you would still be,
                the one I chose…

And so again I walk this lonely path, in search of you,
stumbling along over forsaken, barren ground…
The trees were still staring at me, dancing with the wind,
        you I would find again one day,
                but then perhaps, never found…
                           ~~~~



© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-09-09 08:46 AM


Good Morning Stranger..*s  how be you...catch me if  you can on icq 16042893

hugssssssss
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2 posted 2001-09-09 09:02 AM


Very beautiful, enjoyed.
Sven
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3 posted 2001-09-09 01:59 PM


BC, you do this so well my friend. . .

great job. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma
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4 posted 2001-09-09 02:18 PM


íts always a treat to read your poems, and this one is no exception...love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2001-09-09 02:37 PM


Your poems keep getting better and better : )

<3 RosePetal

The Rusty Knight
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6 posted 2001-09-09 02:47 PM


Very nice.  I liked the inagery of the waterfall.
MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-09-09 03:43 PM


A soft expression and an even softer lingering impression.  Very tender, Bill.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-09-09 04:15 PM


And they all possess this beauty if only our eyes were opened to see it...James
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9 posted 2002-02-10 12:00 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet freind, I know just how you feel, for I have found the girl of my dreams but now all I have to do is go the distance to have her, and I feel the yearning too, but for the love of  a woman, I know I can! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is beautifully touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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