Open Poetry #15 |
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Beauty Of A Woman |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now ![]() |
“BEAUTY OF A WOMAN” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I walk this lonely path, in search of you, stumbling along this forsaken, barren ground… The trees staring at me, dancing with the wind, perhaps they are saying to me, listen for your sound… At the end of the path, you were standing there, under the waterfalls, and I only stared… The sun shone down touching you, through the silence, knowing then for certain, that my heart still cared… Streams of water, cascading over your presence, showers wet, and running through your hair… It shined and sparkled, like diamonds in the sunlight, and I remembered all the nights, of my despair… Your head tilted back, displaying gentle soft lips, there was a time in the past, when I knew them so well… But now they were moist, from droplets that fondled you, not the wetness from my lips, for they would never tell… We spent the night together, close in a loving embrace, I knew deep inside, that when my eyes were to close… And open them once again, you would not be there, but in my heart you would still be, the one I chose… And so again I walk this lonely path, in search of you, stumbling along over forsaken, barren ground… The trees were still staring at me, dancing with the wind, you I would find again one day, but then perhaps, never found… ~~~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning Stranger..*s how be you...catch me if you can on icq 16042893 hugssssssss M |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful, enjoyed. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
BC, you do this so well my friend. . . great job. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
íts always a treat to read your poems, and this one is no exception...love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Your poems keep getting better and better : ) <3 RosePetal |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Very nice. I liked the inagery of the waterfall. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A soft expression and an even softer lingering impression. Very tender, Bill. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And they all possess this beauty if only our eyes were opened to see it...James |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet freind, I know just how you feel, for I have found the girl of my dreams but now all I have to do is go the distance to have her, and I feel the yearning too, but for the love of a woman, I know I can! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet freind, this is beautifully touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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