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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Elvis Has Left The Forum ~*Marge Tindal*~  Treat me like Haiku Don't give me no Senryu Darling, just pen me I swivel my hips With a quiver on my lips Waiting for your kiss Quill me and thrill me I would be so sad and blue If you said we're through O'Tanka you very much Longing for your touch - pen me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... oh, I love ya Margie gal! This is the only poem I got a chance to read today, and I'm off on a business trip tomorrow morning ... but this little hip swivilin' ditty gave me the poetry fix I needed to hold me till I get back next Saturday, lol ... loved it!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he Marge you certainly are creative! I think this is delightful to say the least!! I don't know where you keep coming up with the ideas. I hope you never stop! Treat me like a fool I'll be sad and blue but hut hut hut love me! You're priceless! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- ain't no hound dog here classy with your blue suede ink you did it YOUR way! Love this! Hugs, ~vicky "...a heartbeat in every syllable..." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Elvis is not dead? ROTFL Don't delude yourself To think that you are exempt From our workshop for this month  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Just tickles me plumb silly to know that this is your last impression of Passions for a week ! Have a good trip !  ETHome~ Well ... it just comes from the kitchen cabinet muses~  Love your reply~ Vicky~ Leave it to you ... LOL ! Just show you those swiveling hips and You're 'All Shook Up' !  Nan~ Very, very clever, teach ! I'm dizzy from the merry-go-round ... or from watching Vicky and Kit watching those hips ! !  *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: What fun to read! You have such clever ideas! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ LOL ! That's what my psycho-iatrist says ! Thanks gal ... and I don't have to pay you a couching fee~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
LOL Well, I'm smiling tonight~ This is way too cute Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
whoooohoooo Marge.......these are marvelous....oh my....oh my....you made my day girlie..... love ya Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
!! i could really get on a roll with this one..if i only didnt have to go back to work!!  GO ELVIS!! teehee..youre so silly up margie...  hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL ! Just look at all those smiles~  What fun ...~ Charisma~ Gal ... and YOU made mine~ DG~ Come on girlie girl Give those hips a twisting swirl Work's over - ROCK time~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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