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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-07-16 05:41 PM

I melt within the embers
the warm embers of your eyes,
melting like warm caramel
each morsel of your kiss,
I salivate with moistened lips
melting deeply inside
where feelings flow like salmon
blushing in a stream

I hear your voice
in the whispers of the willows
serenading to sighs of vibratos

The softness of your touch, soothing
like a harp in the chorus of the wind
drawing me in like the tides
Within the fragrance
of a Plumeria moon, I am breathless
as you intoxicate me
into the haven of your desires
with one sweet kiss of your lips.

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 07-16-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-16 05:43 PM

Now that is some sort of kiss...

sensual and enjoyable to read... nicely done

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-07-16 05:55 PM

Yummy...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-16 06:25 PM

mmmmmmmmmm. . . now this does indeed make the night light up. . .

wonderful Victoria. . .

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-07-16 06:28 PM

Yes, that must be SOME kiss

FireDancer123
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 43
Virginia

5 posted 2001-07-16 06:31 PM

Gotta loves those kisses!!! The imagery of this takes you right into the romantic moment. It's like watching a love scene from a movie, right in my head. I loved it.

*Barefeet and Greengrass*

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
"Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Dave Matthews

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-07-16 06:43 PM

Yum, melting like warm caramel. Gives a nice image. Plumeria moon, eh ?

S

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2001-07-17 08:51 AM

Thank you guys and gals...happy you enjoyed

HUGS

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

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