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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-08 05:14 PM


From the cloaks
These children
Break out
And
Dance

The light
Alerts them

From dawn's grasp
They glide


Stretching invisibility


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
1 posted 2001-09-08 05:25 PM



mmmm....invisibility!!
I wonder if the cloak wouldn't prove to be a better place..?

Is it a turn towards painting surrealism now, Mark?

I enjoyed the painting nevertheless....

Thank you
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MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-09-08 05:35 PM


My Melody, "mmm" indeed.  Regarding the cloak, I guess that depends upon its power and its owner...  Hmm -- surrealism...  I guess lately, you're right...  I'm simply in a "Halloweenie mood", if you will -- check out #48 on the bottom of the page.  I'm SO into autumn...

-MVS


"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

[This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 09-08-2001).]

Zinsser
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Calif.
3 posted 2001-09-08 05:49 PM


Mark ... It's the moon of late.... Beacuse I'm doing the same thing all full of vampires and stuff...
~Connie~
BTW ...  I like this piece

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-09-08 05:55 PM


Perhaps, Connie... or perhaps it's the air turning a touch crisper and the night encroaching a tad sooner...  BRING IT ON!

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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