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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Cave Of The Good Dreams ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ There is a little lay-me-down where I go to dream-sleep Amidst the thoughts of Little Boy Blue and the critters of Little Bo Peep   It is a cave of deepest sleep where friendly Dragons snore Where tiny garden Fairies sprinkle wishes forevermore  In the cave of the good dreams they inkwell my thoughts galore Then some Magic Genie Muse quills them whilst I snore  Deep, deep, deep within the cave of the good dreams galore I hesitate to confess it but I'm off to dream-sleep some more ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I'm on my way to find this cave of Good Dreams....wanna meet the friendly dragons...and must fing those fairies which sprinkle wishes forevermore Love it as always Marge! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge...This is so sweet. Reads like a fairy tale...Tis is a keeper for when the young ones come around! Thank you for the smiles today! Magical Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I saw this just in time for it's bedtime overhere again, so maybe I'll find this cave before I dream.  TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ May you sleep the sleep of deepest wishes come true~  Enchantress~ I am so pleased to know it will be shared with little ones~  Titia~ Ahhh, you will find the cave of good dreams just behind the eyelids of happy thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marge, You've done it again, made me smile in awe. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
So that's how you do it ... I have to find me a genie ... a real one ... I rub bottles and lamps, then look inside and all I get is poked in the eye by a solitary finger  |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Real nice Marge, to remember our dreams, we would all have best sellers. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NightShade~ Thank you soooooooooo much~ Rex~ LOL ! What kind of bottles you been rubbing ? No Genie I know would give you the finger~  Unless it was a  Shadow~ I remember mine ... where's that 'best seller' ? LOL ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so fun makes big smiles and warm fuzzies!! "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thanks gal~ I like spreading those smiles and fuzzies ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Goodness! I must be living in a cave to let this one sneak so far past me! LOL! I fell in love with the idea of this the very first moment I heard it...but then...you knew that. "In the cave of the good dreams they inkwell my thoughts galore Then some Magic Genie Muse quills them whilst I snore" I just love the thought of this... What a quiet and peaceful place your 'cave of the good dreams' must be. Well...except for the snoring that is..LOL! Love this! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-10-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ And YOU keeping me up all night was the inspiration for this one, as you very well know~ 'Tis I who thank you~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
tis is very nice! almost fooled one into thinking that dreams are forever beautiful, forever something to look forward to. cottage |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cottage~ Ahhhhhhhhhh, and that's the magic found in The Cave Of The Good Dreams~ Thank you for the read and reply~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
If every child had a place like this the world would be a better place....come to think of it adults need it to. I am glad you shared it with us....we may not find it, but at least we know what we are looking for now. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, The magic in your writing is boundless. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm really enjoying your series of works for children (large & small alike)... It's just wonderful..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dan~ We can make it so - for the child and the child in us~ JD~ Thanks so much - I try~ Nan~ Awwww, the kid in me loves sharing with the kid in all of us~ And besides that ... it's Vicky's fault ! Tee-Hee ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well this little kid loved it, and I also hide out there at night, however, my muse is a lazy little critter, and wakes me to do the writing! Cute Marge, and I too am loving the children's work you are doing, as I don't plan on growing up anytime soon. *~If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Well ... join the troops ! Kids-At-Heart-R-Definitely-US ! Thanks bunches. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You snore? LOL! Not me! Don't know why the covers are in my mouth when I wake up This is so spritely done. Your imagination and dreams join hands even in sleep. Enjoyed!Sincerely, Regina |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Good dreams a wonderful little ditty Marge. Enjoyed the smile today.Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your cave sounds like a wonderful place, Marge  |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Great dream! As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everybody~ Right now I think we'd all love to crawl in that cave and dream the good dreams~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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