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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~*~ Guilty Rose ~*~  Guilty rose….. Oh… Guilty rose Red rose Of my secret passions And haughty dreams  Pink rose Of my endless obsession Of what is not seen  White rose Of my incredible innocence In the midst of my awakening insights  Yellow rose Of my jealous heart Where my affection must remain Unshared ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ *An old poem...but I hope you'd enjoy it. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I really liked your interpretations of the different colored roses. Your poem was nice. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I never realized that roses had so many attributes... now how about that fiery, nectarine-looking one which always commands my attention? -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I like it...lovely description of these wonderful roses Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyEnchantedMelody~ Well ... it blooms anew ... and what a LOVELY bouquet of thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Domzi I'm glad that you liked it..... Welcome to Passions Thank you ----------------------- Mark Oh..yes, they have many attributes....but you see in them what you want to see. Or perhaps reflections of what they evoke in you.... Sooo what do you see in that fiery, nectarine-looking one which always commands your attention?  Why does it command your attention, by the way?...  Thank you --------------------------- Charisma I'm glad you liked it..... Thank you -------------------------- Marge Yes....It blooms and I wish it would always do .... Thank you dearest....& warm hugs to you..  ************************ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 09-08-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My Melody, beauty always commands my attention, and when it is unique... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"She dwells with beauty-Beauty, that must die; And joy, whose hand is ever at his lips bidding adieu." ((Keats)) I don't know why I remembered this qoutation as I sat to reply..... "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder" and if you asked me.....in his heart and soul as well.... I'm sure you have a good taste.... Thank you *********************** |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Roses of many are we women who long to be free Miss Melody, how beautiful this is, and presented so nicely, as well. Sandra |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
MyEnchanted_Melody- Yes...I did enjoy this piece. It's blooming with some lovely thoughts. Nicely done. Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-08-2001).] |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Sandra.. Indeed, women of roses we are... Thank you dearest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Vicky I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.... Thank you for the sweet comment ***************************** |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this just goes to show. . . that all roses are not red. . . wonderfully done my friend. . . you understand the language of roses well. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Indeed all roses are not red.....and isn't it good that they aren't? I'm only trying to understand it dear friend.... **************************** |
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