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RSEvans
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Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 2001-09-08 01:17 PM


Dew on her petals, sun on her stem,
  My Rose awakens to meet the day,
Morning steam rising from the glen
  The soft wind causing a gentle sway.
Stretching her face to meet the sun,
  Her petals rich and lush,
She'll bask in it til day is done
  And grow with a gentle push.
She'll feel the warmth across her green,
  And know that fall is near
And know that time itself twould seem
  Has nothing for her to fear.
For in the ending of her days
  When darkness claims this one
She'll know I loved her in many ways,
  My Rose, My love, My one.

Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.


© Copyright 2001 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-08 01:22 PM


wow.....this is so gorgeous.......love this  

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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2 posted 2001-09-08 01:35 PM


Oooh, this is very beautiful indeed!!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-09-09 08:12 PM


Hi RSEvans,

I loved this very much and roses are my favorite flower indeed,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
4 posted 2001-09-09 08:18 PM


Excellent tribute, as beautiful as a rose.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 297
Texas
5 posted 2001-09-09 10:31 PM


Beautifully nice.  Enjoyed it!
NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey
6 posted 2001-09-10 07:57 AM


Very sweet poem.  Love the description of the rose..

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

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