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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-09-08 04:26 AM


Loves Me Not

Wonder why they never say
hey sweetheart its just me and you.
Wonder why they try me out for awhile
and decide it's something they
don't want to do.
Then they say hey you can
go ahead and date other girls.
Because we're just friends and friends
are free to give everyone a whirl.
I suppose I should be happy
because I can do anything I want.
But I'm really not because
the one I want is the one
that loves me not.

Jameslee
September08,2001

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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2001-09-08 11:27 AM


Impactful, James...  not a pleasant space to find one's self.  If only the grass were greener on OUR side of the fence...

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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2 posted 2001-09-08 11:30 AM


Her loss not yours! True love will come to
you when you aren't looking for it my dear!
nice poem.

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just out of reach
3 posted 2001-09-08 11:42 AM


Obviously they had no idea what they were casting aside. Keep writing and keep smilin'

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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with you
4 posted 2001-09-08 12:55 PM


oh James.....you make my heart ache for you to find "her". hugs  

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5 posted 2001-09-08 12:59 PM


Oh James,  I am in the same boat, and it feels pretty wobbly in there, doesn't it?
Like the poem, but sorry for the thoughts behind it.
Sandra

Domzi
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6 posted 2001-09-08 01:58 PM


I was feeling this poem.
Sounds like something people
go through often.

RSEvans
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7 posted 2001-09-08 02:02 PM


I think we can all associate with that feeling...but one thing it does is stretch our creative and poetic ability...pain is a wonderful motivator for sharing.  Keep sharing, friend.
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