Open Poetry #15 |
Diana of the Moon |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Diana of the Moon, Goddess of my heart you who are the other half of my being I, your lost son, ask for your wisdom by the light of your silvered face grant to me the knowledge of your mysteries so that I may be united with you walking with you through the forests of life with arms outstretched, I ask for your blessing by light of star shine and cool wind of fall protect me from those who would oppress arm me with the arrows of your moonlight so that I might shield those who are weak and guide them to your bosom of life speak to me in dreams Queen of heaven inspire me to be more than I am and fill my soul, earth-bound and lonely with the comfort of your holy presence Diana of the Moon, Goddess of my heart let your glory fill me this holy night make me one with your heaven and shine through me to all who see *Art: Diana courtesy of Crowshaven* ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 09-06-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You are most certainly delighting us with your Goddess poesy...well done Sir! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice Sven...James |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A great poem Sven. I love how it reads and love what it says. Almost like a prayer this one is. Great job! |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, I love this poem.....it reminds me of a prayer. Also love the pic! ~Laura~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I really enjoyed this one Sven. Excellent writing!! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This I Like! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
speak to me in dreams Queen of heaven inspire me to be more than I am ---------------------- What a lovely evocation ... I hope she would answer you soon..... Thank you ****************************** |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned.... excellent as always my friend Charisma |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful work from the Beautiful Heart! I'll be looking forward to more of these. Sven Pen! *jenn* Don't gain my affections then cover my eyes. Don't sweep me off my feet then fail to catch me before I hit the floor. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Decaflame, thank you my friend. . . it's something that I've been wanting to do for a while now. . . I hope that you enjoy it. . . James, thank you for reading. . . Munda, that's the feeling that I wanted to get across. . . thank you. . . Laura, thank you, it is a prayer of sorts. . . Enchantress, thank you for enjoying. . . it's always good when it's enjoyed. . . Zinsser, I'm glad that you like it. . . Enchanted Melody, I hope so as well my friend. . . thank you. . . Charisma, thank you my friend, glad that you enjoyed. . . Temptress, thank you for reading. . . yes, there will be more. . . stay tuned. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Yipee, Sven jumps on the graphic bandwagon Woo hoo, Sven shares yet another amazing poem It's true, this reads like a prayer or sacred chant. I truly do believe that you were born to be a poet, and, I also believe that you had to have existed in a past life in the renaissance era~ My library is going to thank me for this one Hugs, Melissa "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Bump! |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
sven, I wish to be that goddess that you bring to life so well. I'm glad that Missy referred me to this, it is so charming and lovely you have a new fan. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Awesome write, my friend. I am wishing the goddesses would have stepped in today to prevent this tragedy. Peace Sandra |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sven,What a great write!My goodness, you have such great talent! A kind heart as well, my friend! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, you may be right my friend. . . I'll have to think about that one. . . Chelsea, thank you. . . . . . I'm glad that you enjoyed this. . . and I hope that you will enjoy the others in this series as well. . . Sandra, I do as well. . . thank you my friend. . . Saunni, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed this. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A perfect prayer or chant to your Goddess my friend. As above, So below, Words of wisdom, From one in the know!! Great stuff! Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is wonderfully uplifting, as are the rest in this great series, m'friend - Nice work.. |
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