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How We Had Talked
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How We Had Talked |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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How We Had Talked We had talked How it would be Our island hideaway Beside sparkling sea We had talked How dreams grew Enlarging the picture Developing with you We had talked How we conversed You played the music My thoughts I versed We had talked How fast time flies From morning songs To my dream lullabies We had talked How we each sated Desires we hungered The more we created We had talked How hearts became Sharing togetherness In dreaming the same Hope©2001 |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How pretty. Sharing togetherness In dreaming the same Lovely reading. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
As we walked and talked hand in hand across this land mind to heart everyday a new start this is a very lovely read Hope. I truly enjoyed the read alan |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful Hope  very beautiful "Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, I think your ready for action. Enjoyed |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
This is a lovely poem. Some poems evoke messages to individuals that are not in the theme of the poem. The words "Had I talked to you" haunted me through this poem...It is a male thing I guess. This piece sent me to the corner to reflect. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Tracy I am so pleased you enjoyed the read ........ Hope -------------------------------- Sea I also thank you for your sweet , kind reply, much appreciated Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Alan white sand alongside the sea , you are always welcome to share with me .... sharing smiles across the miles Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Ahhh thanks seymour , but I wonder is he ready for action ?? Hope --------------------------- Hi thanks Rusty Knight , had you talked , I wonder what you would have said ?? now you are off reflecting , either shedding , heat , light or perhaps a little insight Hope |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Woderfull Words..... ~Connie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ This is just lovely~ Thank you for sharing your gift with us~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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