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Shards of Wine
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Shards of Wine |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A wine glass, Surprise shattering, it breaks, Blood red stain, Demise emotions, it makes. Break demise, Rendering backwards, in thought, Blotting dry, Scattering a way to naught. Shards surprise, Thinking as doing, grabs pain, New wetting, Bleeding and crying, add stain. Giving up, The memories stay, reminds, Underneath, A small remnant square, there finds. Gloom |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Cool write! Love the play of image and words... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very, very intriguing message here, Professor, I compliment you! "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Professor Gloom I love the way you weave your words and I loved this piece of writing. Take care...Sue Suetang |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I like the thoughtfulness of this a lot. You know, you write like someone I read once long ago. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Cpat Hair, I am pleased you enjoy the way My word play with the images. Thank you, Irish Rose, There’s a message here ? And I just thought I was explain the reason For the throw rug, Glad you liked. Thank you, Suetang, Your words are very kind. Thank you, Temptress, I do tend to put emphases on the structure, Unlike many of the modern writers and I am rather an old writer and appreciate your kind words. Gloom |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Supremely captivating poem. Sandra |
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