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Held in Nostalgia
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Held in Nostalgia |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Early September breezes curl around her sache’ as they lazily trail behind her melodious rhythms escape her in the humming of a tune captured in the rustling of leaves about to turn faces, reminiscent in the clouds above smile down upon her in the warmth of Autumn’s noon which holds her in a nostalgic embrace of romance, as she walks in longing. Annie Lehberg 09-04-01 May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
and as she walks in longing of the moon reflected in a mist, treasured times caressed in june, september's fall of autumn kissed, sweetness of the full belonging, raptured by the autumn leaves, soft caress of whispers, less the twilight we wear on our sleaves.... annie in nostalgia comes with lines so full in sunset glow, ever in the trails forever, touching hearts who know... who know.... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Doreen, you have made what I thought was a pretty good piece WONDERFUL, wow, thank you so much for such gracious comments. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love a wonderful September breeze. . . you never know what it's full of. . . wonderfully done. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
thanks so much for the great response.... [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 09-05-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress~ A lovely, lovely piece. Delicately delivered~ The title enticed me in and I was pleased to find a beauty~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I really can't explain exactly why but something about this reminds me of the South. Loved the read. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
September is a beautiful month...and so is your poem Annie...hugss ~Victoria~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Marge, your replies are always so thoughtful, thank you so much. Duncan, I am not sure why, but i feel that nostalgia was born in the south. Though I am not a southerner, I feel as though I should be, as I have always been very nostalgic. Thank you for the kind response. Victoria, Thank you, your replies mean alot to me. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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