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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-09-04 11:22 PM

Early September breezes curl
around her sache’ as they lazily
trail behind her
melodious rhythms escape her
in the humming of a tune captured
in the rustling of leaves about to turn

faces, reminiscent in the clouds
above smile down upon her in
the warmth of Autumn’s noon
which holds her in a nostalgic
embrace of romance, as she walks
in longing.

Annie Lehberg
09-04-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-09-04 11:29 PM

and as she walks in longing
of the moon reflected in a mist,
treasured times caressed in june,
september's fall of autumn kissed,
sweetness of the full belonging,
raptured by the autumn leaves,
soft caress of whispers, less
the twilight we wear on our sleaves....

annie in nostalgia comes
with lines so full in sunset glow,
ever in the trails forever,
touching hearts who know...
who know....

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

2 posted 2001-09-05 08:26 AM

Doreen,

you have made what I thought was a pretty good piece WONDERFUL, wow, thank you so much for such gracious comments.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-05 07:30 PM

I love a wonderful September breeze. . . you never know what it's full of. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

4 posted 2001-09-05 08:21 PM

thanks so much for the great response....

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 09-05-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-09-06 12:32 PM

AWhispersCaress~
A lovely, lovely piece.
Delicately delivered~

The title enticed me in and I was pleased to find a beauty~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2001-09-06 12:47 PM

I really can't explain exactly why but something about this reminds me of the South. Loved the read.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2001-09-06 08:35 AM

September is a beautiful month...and so is your poem Annie...hugss

~Victoria~

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

8 posted 2001-09-06 01:17 PM

Marge,

your replies are always so thoughtful, thank you so much.

Duncan,
I am not sure why, but i feel that nostalgia was born in the south. Though I am not a southerner, I feel as though I should be, as I have always been very nostalgic.
Thank you for the kind response.

Victoria,
Thank you, your replies mean alot to me.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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