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Open Poetry #15

Sunkissed Air

Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2001-07-16 11:39 AM

Sunkissed Air

Reflecting you on ripples, soft
time drifting, draws thoughts near.
Serenaded by natures gifts
and sunkissed by the air.
Streaming were the memories
floating within view,
fading in and out as words
connected me to you.

The sky graced me in bluest blue
on pillowed clouds, eyes rest.
Circles rippling, echoing peace
as thoughts became undressed
of you and all the memories bared,
mirroring my soul.
A summers day, sunkissed air
and you within mind's stroll.

*thank you Logan for a loan of your words...

~A~

[This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (edited 07-16-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-16 11:47 AM

very nicely done... glad you could float the loan from Logan... I think it paid off in interest

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
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2 posted 2001-07-16 01:45 PM

AliceThruGlass~

This thought likes me very much~

'Circles rippling, echoing peace
as thoughts became undressed'

Muchly enjoyed.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-16 03:39 PM

soft and tender

as gentle caresses

lovely

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

4 posted 2001-07-17 06:37 AM

Cpat, Marge and VAS

thank you for reading. I saw the expression in a response by Logan and it made me think of a restful float in a pool the other day. *s

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2001-07-18 04:09 PM

Your poem is absolutely gorgeous... you must have been led by a very gentle spirit while writing. Beautiful words.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-07-18 05:58 PM

Alicethruglass-
   Ah..such lovely and tender thoughts.
   Enjoyed this very much.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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