Open Poetry #15 |
Walk with me in the Moonlight |
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Walk with me in the moonlight Walk with me in the moonlight Stare with me at the starlight Talk to me ask me whatever you want of me Just don’t expect me to be anything but me Hold my hand as we walk thru the sand Hold me close as the cold north wind blows across the land Kiss me if you wish Just understand for you to do it might be my wish I just the company that you want to give I don’t want you to change the way you live I am not asking for love from above or beyond I just want the real you to respond I just want to be close to you So when I need a friend I can look to you If I walked with you in the sunlight Would you walk with me in the moonlight Could we hold hands As together we cross the sands If we walked thru the gentle waves of the ocean blue Would you walk thru the darkened caves or would that be too much to ask of you If I gave you flowers Could you let yourself go and just feel their power If when alone I wanted a hug and kiss Would you just allow yourself to or would you, me just dismiss Would you walk with me Talk to me Would you hold my hand Even though I am just a friend Would you kiss me Or just go thru life wondering what would it have been like Icyheart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Here is my hand....and I would love to walk across the sands. Lovely imagery here Alan. Nice work. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful picture. I think we'd all like to take that walk. It sounds so serene. Beautiful write here Alan If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Nice hands Enchantress soft too..thanks for your kind words..you drew a smile from me. Tracey..I am glad you liked the thought. Thank you . |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Hey Alan, I know a quiet beach just a short drive from here......... Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 09-05-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Alan...your writing has grown...this is a lovely piece and it just tugs the heart |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, any lady would love a walk in the moonlight with you, good Sir. And the way you presented it, even more so. Sandra |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Loved the sweet and tender innocence of this... ~Tier |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
I loved this, so soft and tender. *s* |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you for your very kind remarks. alan |
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