Open Poetry #15 |
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My Rose |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA ![]() |
Limbs of sinew and garnished in beauty, You stretch through my life like a vine Marking your way through my heart Letting me know that you're mine. My Rose is wild born and lovely Like the crimson tear from my heart She marks my waking with love's thoughts And my dreams with smiles from the start. Her smile is like sunshine incarnate Her voice like the lilting of Spring Her faith like the breath of a fresh Autumn breeze And she fills me such longing. So know that I love you, my Rose Like no other man that you've known, And one day, God willing and fate allowing I'd love to make you my own. - For my BlakRose Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth. |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I wondderful tribute to BlakRose. Dawn |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I was wondering if you were ever going to post here again RS. Welcome back! Beautiful love poem, I'm sure Rose was thrilled by it. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done. . . a true testament to love. . . it's good to see you again my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
"You stretch through my life like a vine" I love that!! Great poem. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
Your Rose was thrilled, and deeply touched by the poem, it brought tears to my eyes.. Thank you, my Knight in Shining Armor.... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
A wonderful statement of love. Great read. alan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah this is just so sentimental. I love it. Both of you are very lucky If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Thank you all for your wonderful responses. Every time I come here, I'm swept away by the generous comments and supportive nature the forum offers. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RSEvans~ Thanks for coming home and gifting us with your rose~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
A romantic and beautiful poem. Hope your rose really appreciates it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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