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Open Poetry #15

decades spinning

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-09-04 10:27 AM

decades spinning

I Mary Tyler
more packages
into a cart
amid
faces surrounding,
squirming with
quagmired thoughts
of histories,
those proximate
wondering whose
pressure's mounting

so go beyond the
aisles of isles

no way for one
to pass in
genesis
without encompassing
bodies' mess
for ripples string
to bring
a calm within
abode's caress

silenced halls are
longer when
transported with
thoughtful
motion

soon comes a quieter
glen
where rippled blue
'tween meadows
green
are yesteryear's
thoughts so true

sandwiched
whens and thens

cartwheeled into
tomorrows

springboarded from
yesteryears

while it means
naught to you
it is fraught
with meaning
for one

I
pick
you

in you
decades
shall spin
with
significance

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-04 10:31 AM

"cartwheeled into
tomorrows

springboarded from
yesteryears"

I like that part best

this is wonderful

"Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum"

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-09-04 08:13 PM

And decades can retreat with meaning, til one is standing in a field of grain, awed with the bounty that nature will bring to all crops...liked this, hope you don't mind the rambling.very gentle smile

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-09-05 08:51 AM

while it means
naught to you
it is fraught
with meaning
for one

I
pick
you

in you
decades
shall spin
with
significance
Nicely summed up and reflective of the feelings expressed... I enjoyed this on several levels.. nice work!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2001-09-06 08:38 AM

This piece had me doing cartwheels..

..enjoyed..

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 2001-09-06 12:35 PM

Flamey,

this one has such neat phrases - the decades with significance was wonderful!

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