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one red boa
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one red boa |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The mad hatter danced across the stage with one red boa for a tail he led parade with microphone and twirled baton beyond his age... He wore a trenchcoat of chiffon leather trousers, rhinestone thong-- he moved with stealth of certainty as he beckoned all, "come see..." He curled his finger in come hither, crafting wiles within the air... He pranced. He spun. He came undone. Every step a stance of dare. He danced the way we all long to... he danced the way I used to do. I saw a shaman dance tonight. Magick trance of dark to light. A gesture from tomorrow's past-- I fell into the looking glass. I spun for ages without hold... ages lived and not grown old. I took a journey with this man. And though I do not understand any more I did before-- I'm glad I had the chance to dance. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh Man....I'm soooo jealous... Hes so cool...and gives such an amazing live performance... Love to watch that boy strut  Way Cool me twin. (and ya just knew I'd have to go find ya some pics right)     A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I followed you through this story. Rhinestone thong eh? Got a picture?  Sounds like you had a great time. Great words. Thanks for the journeyIf she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Huh! Know where you've been! This, me thinks, is one of your best, my friend. Mucho enjoyed the the dance. jwesley |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Good gosh girl...that is what swirled before my visions of the night... well done Serene One.... |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You make me want to go to another concert. I'd forgotten what fun they can be. Nice work, my friend. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and to dance again?? love it as always. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh MY...you should send this to him!!! It's great!  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hell, you shoulda sent him to me!!..... i only got to see him on the halftime show last superbowl... wrote him a pome too... hehe great write here serene-one...! wish i was there.... *bigsigh* |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
leather trousers, rhinestone thong-- he moved with stealth of certainty I would move with stealth too wearing one of those...ouch. A lot of energy in this piece as I am sure the subject. *S* Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all...I admit that I am "Jaded" but this was just "Amazing"--so enthralled I found myself "living on the edge..." and at the end...hey...I was nuttin' but a "ragdoll" from all that "sweet emotion"--- and okay...so this reply was a bit lame, but fortunately, they also played "big ten inch" ROFL...now I'm off to recuperate...takes me longer these days....sigh...but with a smile. |
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Miss Behavin' Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 84 |
DANCIN' FEET  |
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