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Free Flying |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Damn your looking good Please forgive me for this look But I just can't stop staring I'm wondering what your wearing Or are you free flying under there For our picnic out some where Let me find out, If you please You know we'll never make it To that grove of trees Thank You |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
interesting rhyme scheme...and interesting topic, I've wondered the same thing...it's a nice feeling |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Shadow: LOL I had fun writing this... Thanks : ) ~Connie~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and thank you!!! lol. . . too cute. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
you made me smile. thank you this is sooo cute alan |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sven & Alan Thank You and I'm glad I was able to make you smile ~Connie~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is cute. We all may wonder, but the rest of us have to much decorum to ask it!!!  . If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Tracey: Thanks I can see your smile : ) |
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