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Because I Have Learn To Dance
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Because I Have Learn To Dance |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Because I Can Dance And You Can Too! I dance among the thistles thorns do protrude sharply, but never a wince from I for truly happiness abides. Going about it knowing the true secret to life is just a matter of how you look at what’s showing. “Oh yes” the pain is there! treating it tenderly something that must be done learning new steps is the key. Just picking up my step to the dance of life’s beat when things keep on coming with no regard to me they treat. Life has little secrets open your eyes to see and blessings will start flowing I promise this true to be! Music comes in all forms adaptation necessary, for dance of life with god-speed to flow free endlessly. Cause I have learned to dance life’s been very kind indeed, you can experience to joys unforeseen to you! Life’s thistles will always be taking advantage of you! take a good look then come dance with me and be set free. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
jazz must be a style to represent life...the beat keeps changing making it hard to stay with the rhythm of it all this is what your poem made me think of, always needed help explaining jazz  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Going about it knowing the true secret to life is just a matter of how you look at what’s showing how true how true.... I enjoyed |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Life has little secrets open your eyes to see and blessings will start flowing I promise this true to be! I really only dance while drunk because I have two left feet. Cerenity, beautiful words. "Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts Cerenity...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is wonderful my friend. . . you're really growing with this one. . .  great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just dance around those thorns and you will go untouched. Write on. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ohh..To dance like this is wonderful. I love the way you describe this! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Cerenity, this is beautiful, so beautiful! I love this. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, I want to thank you for stopping by and for such kind replys, This year for some reason has been a tough one and so the tough have to get dancing sort of speeking in order to not fall to a point of not being able to get back up, I guess looking at life from the positive side for me has helped even when it's bad! thank you again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Going about it knowing the true secret to life is just a matter of how you look at what’s showing. “Oh yes” the pain is there! treating it tenderly something that must be done learning new steps is the key. Just picking up my step to the dance of life’s beat when things keep on coming with no regard to me they treat.' Thank you so much, Cerenity, for sharing this encouraging poem...something much needed these days...wonderful work! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Cerenity this was a splendid read4me2nite and I thank you Poetfriend for sharing your poem... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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