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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
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0 posted 2001-09-03 05:47 PM



Vodka thoughts abound
no gravity in this world of sound
for twists and turns, like spinning tops
sniffy smells of forget-me-nots
Tumble with me oh ground

Twas pictures so perfect, a summer eve
breeze caressed skin fair
For something was amiss
Twas love abourne this air

Quirky smiles, bubbling wines
Emotions mixed as tender vines
A kiss, not deep, touch as sleep
remember the dreams inside

The morrow is but morrow
and the past already gone
Love, the test of time
A shiney, shiney song

Recall the days of wonder
yet wonder we do in space
Images of you, my love
my angel fallen from grace...

© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2001-09-03 06:11 PM


This is not so very quirky, kind of profound, actually.  
Like it lots.
Sandra

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
2 posted 2001-09-03 07:29 PM


I love this!
I find it refreshing!
Great Job!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-09-03 09:31 PM


Very interesting. Made me think. I got even more out of it with the second read. Love the last stanza

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
4 posted 2001-09-05 07:07 AM


Intoxicatingly sweet to me. I think the thoughty and querks add sparkle!

Sincerely,
Regina

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