Open Poetry #15 |
Quirky querks and thoughty thinks |
Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Vodka thoughts abound no gravity in this world of sound for twists and turns, like spinning tops sniffy smells of forget-me-nots Tumble with me oh ground Twas pictures so perfect, a summer eve breeze caressed skin fair For something was amiss Twas love abourne this air Quirky smiles, bubbling wines Emotions mixed as tender vines A kiss, not deep, touch as sleep remember the dreams inside The morrow is but morrow and the past already gone Love, the test of time A shiney, shiney song Recall the days of wonder yet wonder we do in space Images of you, my love my angel fallen from grace... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is not so very quirky, kind of profound, actually. Like it lots. Sandra |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love this! I find it refreshing! Great Job! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Very interesting. Made me think. I got even more out of it with the second read. Love the last stanza If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Intoxicatingly sweet to me. I think the thoughty and querks add sparkle! Sincerely, Regina |
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