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Where heaven met hell
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Where heaven met hell |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I'm too far away I miss your tender touch I just want to get there to the place we call home In the night that's when it's harder This bed needs two souls one's not enough to fill its void At dawn is unberable I want you and I'm unable to have you Rescue me from this place where heaven met hell Take me in your arms I'll love you better This time it will be forever |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"This bed needs two souls." I won't tell you how many times I have thought this same thought...many times will suffice...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How true, how true, how true. And so well put If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So much the way I feel, and I wonder, would one more chance to do it better, to love more(is that possible?) make things different? So much longing and lonliness here, well expressed. Sandra |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I wish for you the second chance you want. The poem says it all with emotion good job. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A 'second chance' would be your wish but I doubt you could love any better than already poetically done. Hard to improve on perfection. |
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