Open Poetry #15 |
The Chains That Bind |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Breaking free from the chains that bind, the tortured soul within her mind. No longer can she look into her past, even when the pain doth everlast. She must move on into the future, and break the chains that try to contain her. She knows not how, she just knows why, she knows somehow she's got to try. She hopes for tommorrow to bring a better day, and asks God to help her along her way. She must now take a different path and try not to live in the aftermath of a life that has often made her cry, she must now take wings and learn how to fly. Down a different road her feet must take, a new days journey she now must make. It's time to break the chains that bind the tortured soul within her mind. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What torment love brings upon us. You have written of the tormented soul in my mind here. The words are just so damn true. Wish I couldn't relate so well Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
...She knows not how, she just knows why, she knows somehow she's got to try... If she knows that it's not right, then, yes, she must try. Good write. Melton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
We all have demons that torment us at times and it takes courage to cast them off...well done Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well written on the dark side. Well presented and expressed!! Everyone shouldbe able to relate to this! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Well Written !!!! < Thank You |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very thoughtful piece. I enjoyed this. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
"She must now take a different path and try not to live in the aftermath of a life that has often made her cry, she must now take wings and learn how to fly. Down a different road her feet must take, a new days journey she now must make." That right there got to me. This poem drew me in and kept me reading. Thank you. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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