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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rachel And Goosey Lucy ~*Marge Tindal*~  Such a sweet little picture lays fresh upon my mind Of a special little girl who was so very kind Rachel is her name and with her Lucy kitty They wiled away the hours both of them looking pretty My mind photographed this scene it seems like only yesterday Rachel and her Goosey Lucy spent many an hour in play Now Rachel's grown tall and lovely and Lucy's grown lazy it's true But I've a picture in my mind that reminds my heart of these two Happy Birthday, Rachel Allison Siess Though you turned the Big 18 you'll always remain a snapshot of that special 'little girl' in your Aunt Margie's eyes. September 2, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
OH Marge what a wonderful way to celebrate Rachel's birthday, and you present a lovely image from her here...you've done a wonderful job with this one my dear Poet. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
How precious! A perfect poem with such an adorable picture. This should bring a smile to your niece! Hugs, Deb |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marge, An everlasting gift to be cherished by this lovely, young woman you have presented to us. Thankyou. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Happy Birthday, Rachel! This is adorable, Marge! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge...What a wonderful gift for Rachel. Yet another birthday celebration in your family this past week. Very lovely... and loving of you. Hugs, Nancy. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Now Rachel's grown tall and lovely and Lucy's grown lazy it's true But I've a picture in my mind that reminds my heart of these two What a sweet poem and great finishing stanza...... we will always have our memories No one ever listened themselves into trouble. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Never do I come to open a poem of yours that I should think to expect what I am pleased to find! Please extend a Happy Birthday to your niece! She has SUCH a talented Aunt! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh how fast they grow Marge! I love the picture and the sentiments. You can recreate these precious memories so well! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Thank you ... She's too far from my reach, but close in my heart. BloomingRose~ She'll 'kill' me ... but here she is now~  NightShade~ Thank you. Denise~ And so is she ! ! Enchantress~ Yes, another celebration of memories~ Thank you. LonelyStranger~ And how good those memories are. Karilea~ I'm just glad ya' opened ! ETHome~ Too quickly in passing is thing we call time. Thank God for the memories~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 Happy Birthday to grownup Rachel And this Goosey Lucy Kitty cat How the years fly by so quickly She's become eighteen and Lucy fat   Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, this is a lovely gift for a lovely young lady. Happy birthday Rachel. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, WOW they are all so beautiful. *L* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I think she may be one of the luckiest girls in the world, to have an aunt like you! Thanks for shraring her sweet picture too. Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ She will LOVE your sweet rhyme. Thank you~ Dee~ Thanks so much ... she'll peek in to see these greetings~ Seymour~ Yeah  ... she's a beauty for sure~Martie~ I'm a pretty lucky Aunt ! And she lives in Yucaipa ... so she's closer to you than me~ That's okay ... I told her she could call 'Aunt Martie' if she needed anything ! *Hugs* sis of my heart~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a lovely gift to your niece on her birthday. A lovely write. Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Beautiful poem and a beautiful girl! Hope life is really good to her. The picture is darling! Today was my sister's birthday and I have been thinking about her a lot, so your poem kind of eased a painful spot! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracey~ Thank you so much. BettyLou~ For my words to have reached out and touched you in any small way is a blessing to us both. Thank you for letting me know. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
What a way to pay tribute to a daughter. I am sure she will treasure this poem for a long time...Thank you for sharing it with us. Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- This is such a lovely way to express your love for your niece. I'm sure she will cherish this for years to come. Birthday presents don't get any better than this. Happy Birthday, Rachel! Thanks for sharing her picture with us, Marge. She's a beautiful young lady. Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-03-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RustyKnight~ Thank you ... it's my sister's daughter and the love of my life~ Vicky~ Thank you, sweetie~ She did enjoy it ... and her mom printed it out for her~ *Thanks all ... it's so nice to share~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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