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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-09-01 07:43 AM

Is Love
Just A Test?

I'm not totally stupid believe it or not.
I know what my heart does or doesn't want.
I know when I do or don't stand a chance.
My heart tells me all kinds of things
when it's reaching for romance.
It may take awhile but me and my heart
always figure things out somehow
and then we make all the necessary adjustments
like final goodbyes or tearful letting go's,
goodbye kisses and last movie shows.
But someday I'll wake up in the morning
all excited and refreshed
and smile as I discover
what remains has stood up
to love's test.

Jameslee@September01,2001
AndThisWillHappenSoon
UnlessLoveIsJustATest

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-09-01 07:46 AM

Yep that's the way it goes and time heals and we rebound.....Like the strength in the ending James...Very good !

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-09-01 09:39 AM

Oh dear, if love is just a test I think I'd get a D- for the mastering of it. Ah, but I'd get an A++ for the feeling of it.

Enjoyed this.

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-09-01 10:39 AM

Love is a test. But if you put your heart into it you will pass with ease...just remember what goes with love hand in hand.."honesty"
I liked your work. It is a good read

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-09-01 11:45 AM

One of your best so far, James.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-09-01 11:47 AM

James, this is fantastic. I liked this very much

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2001-09-01 08:28 PM

Love tests my nerves, I like this one, great poem.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-09-01 09:20 PM

Very good thoughts, James. I hope love is a test that eventually finds us deserving..
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-09-01 09:26 PM

JamesMichael~
Enjoyed the thought behind this one, my friend~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

9 posted 2001-09-01 09:31 PM

James, I enjoyed the way you put this question.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2001-09-02 11:40 AM

i think sometimes love teaches us to be on guard from the loves we have met in the past..and dont make the same mistakes again...just different ones ha..

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

11 posted 2001-09-02 12:13 PM

love is but a test of time
words you shared, in wonder-rhyme...

thank you
Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

12 posted 2001-09-02 01:23 PM

...But someday I'll wake up in the morning
all excited and refreshed
and smile as I discover
what remains has stood up
to love's test...

I like this. Good read.

Melton

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

13 posted 2001-09-02 01:26 PM

Like it a lot...

Charisma

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