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rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2001-08-31 11:34 PM

The river reed
Of cornfield bottoms
Traipsing cow paths
In butter cup alleys
A stick is a stick
And fishin's good
Thumping ground for bait
Climb a tree and escape
Till the Sasquatch
Chase you home
Time for bathing
Sun down and tin tubs
Boar hair brushes
Ivory soap
Honeysuckle Lullabies

Put on your wheels and glide
Valley of the Barbie Dolls
Child of bell bottomed pride
Looking like trumpetstiltskin
Saturday Night Fever
Every day of the week
Sporting Dorothy Hamill
Days at Zuma Beach
What is the meaning of
"Gag me with a spoon"?
Why would anyone ask
Someone to do that?
Stick me with a fork!

Crash landing
White sands of Gulf
New meat, Sweat
Meat Loaf! And then some
Twangs of electric pangs
Bikini rare.
What a difference a Band Aid
Can make to the bare.
Outing in blooming space
Lifting lighters in concerto
Of jackals taking a chain saw
Across the necks of guitars
Hair going up in flames
All over the Dome
Aqua Net hazards
Bang your head!
What? I can't hear you!
My makeup is too loud!

How wholesome it can be
To regress
Way back
To when you were nothing
But freckled milk

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-09-01 12:28 PM

"Gag me with a spoon"?
Why would anyone ask
Someone to do that?
Stick me with a fork!

and

What? I can't hear you!
My makeup is too loud!

Cracked me up...loved this.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-09-01 12:43 PM

Loved this. But Duncan took the exact words right out of my mouth. Those were the phrases that I found hilarious too. Charming look back on the days that we sometimes would rather forget!!

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-09-01 12:46 PM

hehe....what a wild train of thought you have!

very interesting Regina....I enjoyed the trip through your thoughts.

Hugs,
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-09-01 12:51 PM

This is magic, Regina...the cultural references---your rhythm of thought...very much reminding me of another favorite passions female poet (doreen peri) with jet lightning thought frames...

HEY...you've got a fan in ME!!!!

Wow...

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

5 posted 2001-09-01 09:43 AM

You grew up right before my eyes.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-09-01 10:23 AM

Rwood,
You palette knife quite a bold picture. Enjoyed.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-09-01 08:26 PM

Allot of memories in this one, love it.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2001-09-01 09:10 PM

Great poem Regina. Loved the references to "our" days.

I am really enjoying your work.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-09-01 11:08 PM

RWood~
An adorable reminisce~
Greatly enjoyed it !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2001-09-02 09:55 PM

Regina
Yet another wonderful piece of writing from you. How great it is to reminisce about the old days, I know I love doing that. The seventies were my era and I still love listening to the music of that time and remembering the fashions and everything else.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

11 posted 2001-09-02 10:55 PM

This is adorable. I loved it.

Dawn

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-09-03 03:36 PM

a wonderful walk through the memory lanes of your mind. . .

great job. . .

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