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Listen...for Marge and Mysteria
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Listen...for Marge and Mysteria |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Listen~  listen... can you hear it? ...a deafening silence... the atmosphere cries out for attention longing to be heard listen... and answer in silent recognition ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
they are going to love this ... very cool write Vicky, much said succinctly with imagery. great pic too  well done jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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The Exile Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 52Ontario, Canada |
I really like the feeling: kinda like the feelings i always get from going out alone at night and watching stars... you certainly brought me there with the poem! Thanks - Alex |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Such beauty is bestode upon us each night. It is there are future lies in the star studded skies. Very inlightning poem, thanks for shareing with us. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetVicky~ You know why I like this one ... gathering we are~ Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If I answer it wont' be silent will it? Yup, it is like there are two tin cans, joined by a galaxy of stars, running around the moon, and back again that is for sure! Well done oh perceptive one, well done, and thank you always for your thoughtfulness. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful! The silence says much. Great poem. Hugs, Deb |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
silence.....with volumnes...Love this one very...very much. Charisma |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Mysteria's analogy is as close as one to get as to the how of it all... the why is still out there in the stars, somewhere.... well done Vicky! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This is beautiful...short but sweet! The stars are only silent if we let them be...love ya Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just a 'bump' for the soft beauty of your thoughts~ ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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