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Torn Fabric
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Torn Fabric |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Torn Fabric colors fade in the sun bleach causes stitches to dissolve and become undone betrayal is a thick rope like thread knotted tightly to turn bright red it is not the tie that binds tangles your heart hurts a mind discomforting wrinkles to readjust letting you go no reason to trust choosing better whom I call friend torn fabric of my life will mesh and mend "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-31-2001).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
No combination of words could say it better.... Well Done! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wonderfully expressed. Good friends are great menders in the quilt of life. When your fingers give out they continue the stitch. Sincerely, Regina |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh man....I like this much. Rather reminded me of the biblical parable. With the wisdom to match!  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
choosing better whom I call friend torn fabric of my life will mesh and mend Healing will occur, hopefully scarring will be minimal. I like the style of your writing. |
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