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Open Poetry #15

Senryu for Rick

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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USA

0 posted 2001-08-31 10:24 AM

Arrow's flight through air
Pricking sparrow’s song in sing
Rainbows come through mist

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-31-2001).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

1 posted 2001-08-31 10:39 AM

but, but, Lady...is an arrow nature?

or do we have a senyru again

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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USA

2 posted 2001-08-31 10:42 AM

Quite right Virginia...My title was wrong...as I am still working on a haiku....

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

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Tennessee

3 posted 2001-09-01 08:25 AM

Still beautiful!

Sincerely,
Regina

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2001-09-01 01:38 PM

i may be wrong but i have the impression that japanese poetry only concentrates on one single image?

but i really enjoyed the first two lines anyway...definitely unusual

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