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Open Poetry #15

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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2001-08-31 01:22 AM

Naivete and charm get me by
talent for seduction
yet here I am
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alone
wondering why

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-08-31 02:45 AM

UUUUMMMMmm maybe you havent found the right her yet Duncan...Ive asked that question too

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-08-31 04:21 AM

Duncan~
Too cute~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-08-31 05:24 AM

~Smiling~ at a "no smile" situation...

~Wynter

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2001-08-31 07:30 AM

You still have today, perhaps you can write part 2 when you're with her at 1:00am.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-08-31 08:04 AM

Duncan... your short pieces have grown to be among my favorites... emotions and thoughts captured in a few words well chosen..this is no exception... nicely done...

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

6 posted 2001-09-01 10:28 AM

I really love this one...it speaks volumes in so few words...very thought provoking indeed. Janette

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-09-01 03:07 PM

i cannot imagine your not having someone special, duncan... *smiles* wonderful poem...

~Tier

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