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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-08-30 02:37 PM




I run
endurance miles
earning
bonus/experience
points
gaining momentum
increasing speed
energies focused
not upon my heart or his
but the goal of finally
crossing the finish line
just as he had  
long ago...


~Tier
8/01

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-08-30 02:51 PM



Perhaps I see far too much in this one, so I will just say....I understand....

and well done!

Sven
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2 posted 2001-08-30 10:24 PM


and when you cross the finish line. . . the prize??  

great job with this one Tier. . .

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3 posted 2001-09-04 07:11 PM


ok. . . this one goes back as well. . . it really says a lot Tier. . .



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