Open Poetry #15 |
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Rain, Or Tears |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas ![]() |
Rain Or Tears Cold water, sky-tears falling, mingling with the hot, salty ones flowing down my cheeks, pieces of heart, lots of you, being carried away in their rush to the ground. Was it today, or yesterday; a month ago, last year? When doesn't matter, why…does; cold shoulder - I've seen it before, in others, never thought it'd happen to me. Rain stopped, tears still there, today, tomorrow, don't know when they'll quit; rivulets forming on the ground, rain, or tears… tears, washing you away. w. james beard, jr. © August 2001 not me, my friends... [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-29-2001).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sad...helen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Im so glad to see this pain isnt yours...you just tear my heart when you write this way |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Now you know I like this~ ![]() 'When doesn't matter, why…does' Sensentively neat~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The wonderful tears of relief that wash away the memories of hurt! Nice poem James! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks you Helen, and Paula, if it affects your heart than I did what I set out to do...thanks much; Marge, I hoped you would...value your view... and Ethome, thanks for the kind words... walk easy folks jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jimmy--tears are sometimes as refreshing as rain. |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
If not you, than someone.... well done... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
.........wow.....this touches the heart so deep. Glad its not you ![]() |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi jwesley, You are a powerful and wonderful writer, I just read (Marcy) and now this one wow lots of emotions and imagery, very nice. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Broken hearts are hard to mend and poetry may not mend one, but a good poem does help ease the pain...well done |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh my, how moving. Beautiful writing Tracey |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Heartfelt penned...like it a lot. (((hugs)) Charisma |
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