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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2001-08-29 02:01 PM



Withdrawn, Due To Lack Of Interest  or (Please Forgive Me Krawdad)

this morning
I couldn’t believe
what I saw
it was a poem
due to lack of interest
gone in withdraw
felt like a heavy
rock to my heart
was pressed
I take my part
of the blame
yes I do confess
I should have been
more careful
through my haste
now your eloquent words
on the page
have been erased
forgiveness
I do now beg
from you
please keep posting
your words
for me to view



"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-29-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-08-29 02:02 PM



Ditto!

Krawdad
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2 posted 2001-08-30 01:40 PM


Helen,
Forgiven, of course.
e
(Perhaps I should be asking for forgiveness, not for my lack of confidence, but for my lack of patience.)

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