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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-08-28 09:06 PM



This Fear


Fear
Fear in my heart that consumes
Fear that made me run away
Fear of having happiness
Fear of being normal
Fear of being loved

Fear
Fear of losing everything I hoped for
Fear of making all these mistakes
Fear of losing all that you are
Fear of keeping all you are
Fear of unknowing

Fear
Fear beginning to guide my thoughts
Fear growing inside my very soul
Fear taking absolute control
Fear of being here alone
Fear of being shutout

Fear
Fear always here, overwhelming
Fear always present my mind
Fear never giving me peace
Fear always laughing
Fear, let me be

TaraB

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1 posted 2001-08-28 10:06 PM


rosepetals, I hope the fears can be put to sleep and a new perspective achived.  Don't just cope.  Hugs,  ME
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2 posted 2001-08-28 10:08 PM


I hope your fears can be put to rest. Wonderful writing Lady
alan

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3 posted 2001-08-28 10:10 PM


Mother_earth  - Thanks for stopping in.  I'm actually in a very good place right now.  I don't know where this came from.. I surprised myself writing this.  

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4 posted 2001-08-28 10:13 PM


Alan - You snuck in on me there   Thank you for coming in and thanks for the compliment... I'm glad you liked it. As I said I am fine   and hope to stay that way lol.

TaraB

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5 posted 2001-08-29 07:22 PM


just let that fear go my friend. . . you can overcome it. . . you have so far. . .

well done with this one. . . and I liked the way that the lines just came out. . . great job. . .  

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6 posted 2001-08-29 10:48 PM


RP~ you are so sweet,   you deserve all the happiness in the world   I hope this is just something you came up with, and not a real mirror of your feelings, hugs anyway ok  
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7 posted 2001-08-29 10:52 PM


hey thats a good point now I come to think of it I fear almost everything in life.

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.


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8 posted 2001-08-29 11:05 PM


Well written piece! We all have fears of some sort.Some just deal with it better than others.Anyway good work and HUGS--
              
           Dara Beth

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9 posted 2001-08-30 05:44 PM


Sven - Thank you Right now .. at least on the surface I feel fear free   I'm glad you liked it.

SEA - Awww You are so nice. Thank you.and thank you for stopping in.  And forgive for my awful bad bad email skills ... *chuckles*

Moondust - As long as you know how to deal with that fear and live life to the fullest..there is nothing wrong with that I suppose.  Thank you for coming in to read.

Darabeth - That is definately the truth.  Thank you for stopping by and welcome to Passions  

TaraB

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