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Black Canvas |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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Black Canvas She starts with a black canvas Then covers it in color Disguising what lies beneath Most walk by unaware Seeing the bright colors And never grasping What lies beneath There is one, however, Connected by some bond That can always see Through the color He sees what lies beneath Yet, never judges her Never thinks ill of her weakness Instead, he replaces the black With bright colors of his own Until the bright canvas is a reality Without a hint of black |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
*hugs hugs hugs hugs hugs and kisses* hun when you showed me this i thought it was so sweet. thank you so much for writing it about me. i am glad that i can be the brush that makes your canvas bright agian. and you know that this anngel is always there for you. no matter what. for not only am i your brush that makes your canvas bright, but you are my rose that makes me smile. great job hun *hugs* love ya lots jesse When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :( |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
Shan, there is never black, it is shades. Remember as dark as it may seem there is always light. sometimes we need someone to show us, I am glad that she found someone. Enjoyed the read |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah the power of that wonderful connection! Hard to describe but a part of life.... You did a marvelous job bringing this to the reader's attention! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I agree with ethome ..hard to discribe but a part of life....great write!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarrGazer~ What lovely, lovely thoughts~ You've painted the essence of a beautiful friendship~  *That Jesse ... what a heart~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful description Starrgazer .. you've captured a wonderfully inspirational message in this lovely piece, nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done Starr. . . you show how the canvas should be painted. . . great job. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I really enjoyed this! So glad that someone special knows how to compliment your inner self, your world. A rainbow of promise. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Jesse- thank you... for the inspiration and for liking it so much Citizenx- Thanks, I'll have to remember about those shades ... Ethome, Charisma- thanks glad you liked it Marge- Thanks ...sometimes all it takes is a lil angel and the words just seem to flow Kit-Thanks glad you liked it Sven- is there any other way to paint it ? once you have the black the colors mean that much more!! Thanks rwood- Thanks - me too!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
It's great to have someone to connect with and make you feel better. I liked this. |
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