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The scream
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The scream |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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A tight insignificant ball hidden safe and secure from the frozen exterior. No vision needed...reality-free. Existing solely from stores of hatred, in silence it sleeps, waiting to awaken. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The slow build of this is very good...and the feeling comes across quite well... |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Jellybeans, I hope the hatred stay asleep! It is a terrible thing to turn loose. Good luck, ME |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely captured..tension built and contained in the few words chosen and used... good work! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A lot of suffering held within....dark but very descriptive write! I could just imagine the scream let loose in this! |
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RoseThorn New Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 5US - NY |
your writing flows well, paints a very descriptive picture.... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Very descripive verse of a suppressed emotive thing. Depending on how it sifts forward into the outer world, depends on where they put me. In recognition, or the asylum.  Very well done.Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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