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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-08-28 10:58 AM

Thoughts Spacing By

Same time, dimensional each day,
space in time slips away.

Waiting's worth a beat of heart.
Countless times in space, in part,
a piece of me, in thought flies by
to enter yours, in airy sigh.
Distance far, but in between
you and me in vector scene.
Series paged, no printed lines
just empty sets, collected rhymes.
None equal to, but satisfies
spacing thoughts just passing by.

Same time, dimensional each day,
space in time slips away.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-28 11:00 AM

It is what we do in the space between the big times...that measure our lives..

very nicely done...and a pleasure as usual to enter into your words...

I enjoyed

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-08-28 11:01 AM

Great description of the flow of thoughts and how they affect the heart....

                                "Distance far, but in between
                                  you and me in vector scene.
                                 Series paged, no printed lines
                                just empty sets, collected rhymes.
                                  None equal to, but satisfies
                                spacing thoughts just passing by.

                               Same time, dimensional each day,
                                   space in time slips away."

Love that idea as you have put it into poetry...."thoughts just spacing by"  Thanks Wynter!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-08-30 02:11 AM

Wynter~

'a piece of me, in thought flies by
to enter yours, in airy sigh'

Yep ! For three years you've been doing just that !

*Hugs*, my friend~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-08-30 02:48 AM

thank you every one *s

Marge is it that time again? sighhhhhh

You are my calendar...

hmmmmmmmm..may be a title for a new poem...will think on that while I can't sleep tonight

hugsssssss
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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