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Two lips too lonely to reply
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Two lips too lonely to reply ~~Withdrawn, due to lack of interest . . . and I'm not surprised.~~ "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry [This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 08-28-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrawDad~ This is sooooooooooo clever ~ I absolutely adore it ~ *applause* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Thanks, Marge. Didn't know if this would 'work'. Decided it would be 'experimental'. Had the idea stuck in my head for some time, finally became a distraction. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
please forgive me & please read my response poem to you "withdrawn, due to lack of intrest"...helen [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-30-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Clever, clever fellow! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
also please repost the poem...helen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I must concur with helen's request. . . I'd love to see this one. . . please reconsider my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm wondering if there was a poem here or if this is THE poem If you had a poem here and took it away 'due to lack of interest' then I'd have quite a job going down the board and the archives erasing all the poems that just sink with no or little contact/reading, to the best of my knowledge. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I wondered the same as VAS. Due mostly to your own response of 'experimental'. ???? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well you certainly created a topic for discussion...heh heh...I'm as confused as the rest!! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ok, Ok, so I'll repost the dumb thing. Ever get a popcorn seed husk stuck on a tooth, under your gum? Well, this was a corn husk. Just something distracting, stuck in my head 'til I picked it out. Had this dumb idea of writing with the limitation of to,too,two. Hope you don't get any such foolish notions. (Actually, with only one response(thanks again, Marge) I was relieved to be able to pull it. No confidence and all that . . .) However, since as issue has been made I'll see if I can repost the same version. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
 helen |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Very good Krawdad. I was patient I waited to see what would transpire of this. I admit, I was intrigued! So glad you put posted again. The two, too, to was a lovely and creative scheme. Thanks for sharing again. We are slow sometimes, but there's always that special (one) who is lucky enough to catch it. Sincerely, Regina |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Helen,  (close as I can get)Regina, Thanks for your patience and support. e |
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