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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-08-27 03:44 PM

I want to be your Juliet
although with happy ending
I want to be your Marion
my love of ages sending.

I want to become your Scarlett
and you my devilish Rhett
I want to be your lady faire
as you are my Knight errant.

I must always be Pandora
who wants all of which you hide
as she kept hope inside the box
so then, shall I thus abide.

I want to be your true solace
when the days and nights grow blue
I want to be your last lover
whenever this life is through.

I want to be your everything
not simply the one you knew
for in my heart is all of it
my complete desire for you.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-08-27 03:52 PM

this is very cool and clever....
love the references to the classics..
and your cadence is a delight to read aloud
creative write poetess Cat

well done
jm

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-08-27 03:59 PM

"For in my heart is all of it
my complete desire for you."
Yes I know this feeling...hope you find a heart with the same desires...James

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2001-08-27 04:00 PM

This one is fun and sentimentally sweet at the same time. So much said here actually.

Loved this line especially:

"as she kept hope inside the box"

Ah yes...without hope we have nothing....hold onto to it Sandra...and don't let go!

Janette

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-08-27 04:10 PM

Beautiful done....enjoyed it very...very much.

Charisma

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-08-27 04:51 PM

Love the flow and feel of this delightful poem. Very well done!

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

6 posted 2001-08-27 05:06 PM

Dreams do come true. I wish you the best. Great poem.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-08-27 07:03 PM

wonderfully done Sandra. . . such lovely lines and an excellent flow. . .

you've done well with this one my friend. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

8 posted 2001-08-27 07:04 PM

This is beautiful catalinamoon. Something I've thought many times myself.

Dawn

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2001-08-27 07:09 PM

Beautiful thoughts here, Sandra...but I'll bet just being you, would be the best thing to be!!

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2001-08-27 08:52 PM

Very Deserving you are Dear Lady.

What Man could have such as Catalinamoon?
I hope He is something as grand as you!

Sincerely,
Regina

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

11 posted 2001-08-27 10:07 PM

Oh Sandra,
THAT was beautiful....truly. Those words really took my breath away, as I can relate so deeply...
Love, Elise

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

12 posted 2001-08-27 10:38 PM

Juliet and Scarlett's timing was a bit off. Pandora's box was better left untouched, Marion I don't recall but seem to remember Robin Hood expired. You deserve a kinder fate. Very flowing poem of hopeful Love.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

13 posted 2001-08-28 08:56 AM

Wow.......
A very wonderful write Sandra......I really loved it sooooo much.....

The flow....the refrence to all those legends.......make it all so wonderful...

This goes to my library......

Thank you.....
*************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

14 posted 2001-08-29 04:04 PM

All this and more you are
To eyes who choose to see
For vision from afar
Up close beholds your key

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

15 posted 2001-08-29 04:09 PM

Very romantic piece you have written.
It's a longing that many strive for.
Well done.

Deb

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

16 posted 2001-08-29 07:34 PM

Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

17 posted 2001-09-03 01:20 AM

Sandra-
   What romantic thoughts you've penned.
   Enjoyed this one very much!
   Wonderfully done!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

18 posted 2001-09-03 01:23 AM

this packed a whalloping and plaesing punch o yuh

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

19 posted 2001-09-03 02:31 AM

I want to be
the black to your white
the good to your night
the knock at your door
the heart you beat for

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

20 posted 2001-09-03 08:59 AM

I don't know how I missed this one, lil sis, because it stands out in it's total beauty!
What a wonderful write, but your pen always has this effect on my soul!