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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-07-11 03:44 AM

I am the cat
tail--twitching--
yowling at the door
the one you fed
one time too much
the purr that
growls for more.

I am restlessness
of toss
in count of sheep
in weep of cost--
I am black cat
eyes aglow..
that thing you
wish you'd never known...

I am fire.
I am earth.
I am sadness.
I am mirth.

I am Goddess, giving birth...
(My God, don't leave me here alone.)

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-11-2001).]

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

1 posted 2001-07-11 04:21 AM

........

I am dew
I am sky
I am happiness
I am sorrow

I am Demon, kidnapping Goddess

LOL...............

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-07-11 07:13 AM

Yes, you are! and a poet to boot!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-07-11 07:29 AM

A Poet-Goddess

This is excellent m'lady.
Love it!

Maree

"little miss understood
little misunderstood"

~Marry me Jane~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-07-11 08:03 AM

the one you fed
one time too much
the purr that
growls for more.

I am restlessness
of toss
in count of sheep
in weep of cost--
I am black cat
eyes aglow..
that thing you
wish you'd never known...
===============================
I am Goddess, giving birth...
(My God, don't leave me here alone.)
===============================

funny... me and my moody muse had a similar chat last night
so much falls on deaf ears.

yer a Poetry Goddess and ya have some beautiful babies

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-11 10:02 AM

I am restlessness
of toss
in count of sheep
in weep of cost--
I am black cat
eyes aglow..
that thing you
wish you'd never known

nicely done... I enjoyed this a great deal!!

I am wind
that blows from north
frigid touch
and freezing chill
I am loneliness

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-07-11 11:04 AM

serenity, the imagery here is priceless...but then I have 4 cats at this time and have always had cats in my life, so I really understand your words

well done!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-07-11 02:17 PM

Serenity~
You are such a kutey kat !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

8 posted 2001-07-11 04:35 PM

All this and a wonderful poet as well.

"Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

9 posted 2001-07-11 08:31 PM

I am fire.
I am earth.
I am sadness.
I am mirth.

Ahh, the elements of life. What more could you ask for? A very wonderful write and cats do have their way about them, as any animal lover can attest to..very gentle smile, enjoyed very much

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-07-14 06:22 PM

serenity-
   This is great!
   I love it..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

11 posted 2001-07-14 06:37 PM

Cats are michievious and loving, playful when they want, You've penned this one well. The kittens in my closet could tell a lot if they could talk.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2001-07-15 12:14 PM

Thanks to all! This one was sort inspired by my cat, "mojo" who is a wicked little snob! Now I owe her a hug...(she HATES when that happens...heh heh) Thanks again for reading, I appreciate the kindness as always!

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

13 posted 2001-07-15 03:34 AM

Would this be the same Mojo that drinks Southern Comfort...?

This was well done ...

Linda

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

14 posted 2001-07-15 03:05 PM

Thanks for popping in Linda...made my day!

And yep...Mojo kitty is the one and the same whisky drinking cat...except it's just Crown Royal...trying to think, I don't believe I've drank southern comfort since I was a kid...er...a young adult?

A little too sweet for me, But not bad for a very cold Mardi Gras!

Thanks again...I'm off to yowl with the bad kitty now!

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

15 posted 2001-07-15 04:40 PM

I hope you know how much I love this. This was a wonderful poem....made me smile!
Hugs,
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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