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Twenty or Less...#34 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Buried Embers Of old Illuminating Under Layers of Shadows Smoke Creeping Slowly Through The Desolate Frost-bitten Thinking Onward (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." -MVS [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 08-26-2001).] |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
The Desolate Frost-bitten Thinking ------------- Mark.....I'm thinking......mmmmm.... I like the way you toss few words to make a seemingly endless ripples...... To where do these ripples lead? Your words make it quite calmly alluring to contemplate all that..... Wonderful.... Thank you.... *************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Mark, I'm thinking...thinking...okay I really like this, the wording is really cool! Thanks for sharing Cindi |
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Ava'sEden Junior Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 16Far&Away |
A torch still simmering maybe? Funny but I felt you were talking bout me there for a minute. As I love a bonfire and watch it from back porch in the winter. Ava~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My Melody, when words are skipped across a still pond of experience, the ripples tend to go in the same direction, but if it is a river of emotion, feelings can overwhelm the ripples in the direction of those senses. I guess it also depends upon how those words are skipped...? Thank you for the read and reply -- it is always my pleasure to elicit some thoughts... Cindi, just the fact that I inspired some thought is good enough, but I thank you for the reply and kind sentiment. Ava, indeed a torch of sorts... Once more, I am fascinated by the myriad of impressions and interpretations that this series calls forth... Thank you for the read and reply. (I prefer bon-fires at the beach, personally, but they are a magical thing, in their own right, aren't they?) -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
I feel lost love that haunts. Rekindled in the soul yet it is not. The heart plays onward. Ecellent write Mark, your 20 or less really make me think. Throw your heart out in front of you And run out to catch it. ARAB PROVERB [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 08-27-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Crashing waves upon the shore Encircling my thoughts Ebbing onward Evermore [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 08-27-2001).] |
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