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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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0 posted 2001-08-26 02:30 AM

Fly on wings
From ‘Some lines for you’ suggestions by Paula Finn

Fly on wings
forged in winter’s ice
it seems so rightly ended
by an anger ever denied
a drama never intended

Fly on wings
born of your own disavowal
towards a goal that has no name
it was never my intention
to hold you to this flame

Fly on wings
of a youthful heart
that will seek to know again
the warmth of a new lover
lying skin to skin

Fly on wings
strengthened by resistance
to a love that didn’t fit quite right
leave us both the satisfaction
of this one peaceful night

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-08-26 08:16 AM

Well, thank Paula for her inspiration! I enjoyed!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-08-26 11:22 AM

sometimes. . . all you need is that one. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-08-26 11:33 AM

Love flees from our hands, but is imprinted on us forever. Great poem!

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-08-26 11:36 AM

Beautiful!!

Charisma

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-08-26 11:49 AM

Duncan~
wow

"Fly on wings
born of your own disavowal
towards a goal that has no name
it was never my intention
to hold you to this flame"

this is wonderful!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-08-26 11:53 AM

Wonderful! I especially liked the last stanza!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-08-26 12:13 PM

Fly on wings
born of your own disavowal
towards a goal that has no name
it was never my intention
to hold you to this flame

Fly on wings
of a youthful heart
that will seek to know again
the warmth of a new lover
lying skin to skin
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oh I like this very much ...
very cool poem and rhyme scheme Duncan
softly sensual, very cool write indeed.
this goes in my library
jm

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

8 posted 2001-08-27 01:57 AM

Oh how wonderful...this from a line of mine ...I am honoured Duncan

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2002-03-19 08:26 PM

Fly on wings
born of your own disavowal
towards a goal that has no name
it was never my intention
to hold you to this flame

Fly on wings
of a youthful heart
that will seek to know again
the warmth of a new lover
lying skin to skin
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was looking in me library and found this treasure...
I KNEW you understood the moth motto

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-01-12 05:05 AM

I need to read more stuff by you...I'm in that kind of mood.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2006-10-25 01:35 PM

I remember when Duncan wrote...things were just a little bit more right then.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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