Open Poetry #15 |
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A Picture Of Love |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
From nature's beautiful tapestry we have painted our own masterpiece displaying our love on canvas Two lovers walking barefoot along the sand under the brilliant blue sky We have painted our picture with such intensity and passion from our palette of many colors You kiss me by the waters edge and whisper words of love which is music to my ears Your tender touch on my skin awakens feelings from deep within I return your warm passionate kiss which I fill with my want and desire sending it directly to the door of your heart As the day nears its end we repaint the sky with shades of azure and pink and edge it with gold We add some seagulls to our canvas as they fly towards the horizon in search of the setting sun On our final canvas we paint a moonlit night reserved for lovers as their passions and desires unfold beneath the seductive light of the moon Two star-crossed lovers with eyes only for one another arms entwined passions ignited surrendering to love as they climb the highest peak of desire and reach the summit of love Suetang |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're a very romantic poet and you present romance very well! You have captured the essence of what we are all trying to write about when it comes to romance. It's a subject that we can write about forever and the feelings and images never die....well done! |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
suetang, a lovely poem! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Just a lovely word-picture~ I so enjoy reading your poetry~ Thank you for sharing~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Suetang, this is sooooo romantic and beautiful. I sure love this. ![]() Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Two star-crossed lovers with eyes only for one another arms entwined passions ignited surrendering to love This, a silhouette, rendered even if black and white is most beautiful. The charm of your romance shines. Sincerely, Regina |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...a recipe for a perfect day... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I am always so very humbled by all of your lovely comments afforded to me. Thank you all so very much. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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